Animated Story Board Feedback

We gained some feedback from our draft of the animated story board our feedback included things such as:

• The changing between the two sound tracks we used - Class mates advised us to try and create a blend between the two which will make the change in tune less obvious to the audience and generally make it sound much smoother.

• Another point given to us was to alter the pace and timing on some of the images included on our story board - This was because it seemed as if some of our images were crammed in and did not give the audience enough time to view, understand and follow the narrative of our trailer.

• We were advised to add some sound effects if possible - which would help the audience understand the narrative and what is going on within the trailer.

• We were complimented on our use of titles, at the beginning middle and end of our trailer - this also helped establish the genre, narrative and characters within the trailer. Titles are also a common theme within the Social Realism film genre.

• We were also complimented on the narrative of our trailer - as it was put across clearly to our audience through the use a variety of images.